In writing we had been doing making a piece of writing called the Viking Village and some of the people in my class it was easy for them here is mine I hope you like it.
Friday, May 21, 2021
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Great work Alysha. You have described the setting using your senses. Please read this with a buddy and check some of the linking words are correct. It would be quick to change these.
ReplyDeletethank you because when I enjoyed it and do stuff everyday and this I think was my most favourite story to write.From Alysha
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