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Monday, June 14, 2021

My describe Writing

 In writing we had been making a making a piece of writing about the treehouse and a spaceship.

here's my writing that I did about the spaceship.





Me and my amazing friend Annalise are on a walk, and we see an alien spaceship.

And one creature in the aliens spaceship, so I decided to see what things were in the spaceship.Everything in the spacecraft is so big but one of the alien were eating a person on a roundtable it is disgusting for me and annalise, We had  No idea how to get No out of the spaceship when we keep walking. We found heaps of different aliens and things I ask people Ian's how to get out of the shop but they said that me and annalise are never leaving we were both so scared and very nervous .A day after that happens we finally the house. 




1 comment:

  1. You've got some really good ideas Alysha.
    I wouldn't like to go on a space ship.I'd be too worried that they would close the doors and head back to their planet.
    What did the aliens look like?.

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