Me and my class have been making a song on Incredibox. Hope you enjoy it
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, August 17, 2021
Thursday, August 12, 2021
My narrative
We have be doing some narrative I did it about the magic mirror
Ding a ling a ling the school bell rings. In class today not many people were there. It was very weird. My best friend was there, Annalise and Alysha are bff.
When the bell rang the class went to sit on the mat. Miss Clifford did the roll and the notices then she told us what to do for our writing. Annalise and Alysha went on the spinning chairs to do their writing. Miss Clifford told Annalise to go find some cardboard. She said it is in the classroom somewhere. So I looked everywhere. The only place I haven't looked is the top cupboards. We are not allowed to look in there but i did. “You won't believe what I found” said Annalise “I FOUND!!!!!! AN old dirty mirror” said Annalise very loudly. Miss Clifford turned around and said don't touch that mirror but Annalise touched the Magic Mirror and got sucked into the roblox game. But Alysha wanted to be with me so she touched the Magic Mirror and Alysha transported in the exact same place I did. Then we looked and we found a note “Hi look who i have found you need to complete this game and it is don't
My Hook
On your mark get set BANG! I ran as fast as I could there was lots of things to look at but I could not get distracted. My number was 42 and I had short hair,long legs With flippers on.I was very fast but my flippers make me slow.It was hard to run underwater.I was pushing my self to the end I was running so fast that I was first.


