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Tuesday, November 9, 2021

No school uniform

In room 11 we have been doing some no school uniform writing.


No school uniform

Introduction


I strongly agree that having no school uniform at school is better than having a school uniform.



To start: 

If you wear it all week it will be smelly



Example 1   If you try it, if you put it in the washing machine

 it won't dry overnight.



   


second,  It is so ugly on us as we cannot always wash it and it becomes dirty. We all look the same.

And it is so itchy to wear it every day.



Example 2 When we go out in public people laughing at you because we have a smelly uniform. They also laugh because they can get dirty



Finally:It is uncomfortable to wear,It smells bad.It is itchy and I get red marks. 

Example 3  It is smelly to here on us

2 comments:

  1. You have made a wonderful start to your writing, Alysha. Let's work together on writing a conclusion to summarise your writing.

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  2. You have written some super examples Alysha on why you don't like a uniform-well done.
    We never had a uniform at Primary School but we did for High School.It was a blue pinafore with a white blouse.

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