Last week I was playing Fortnite at home with my friend Shikya. It was my favourite game to play. We love it all the time.
Then my Mum came home and put a big box on the table. I
paused the game and opened the box and inside the box was a puppy. The puppy had only three legs. I was disgusted. Then I had a weird feeling about the puppy and I threw the puppy on the ground and kept playing Fortnite.
Then the puppy came to me and wanted me to throw his ball.
I did not want to throw it, but then when he kept coming to me I picked the ball up and I threw it into the boxes. The puppy ran into it. Then the boxes fell on the puppy. I started to like the Puppy because it is and I have one and the puppy only had three. I thought it was adorable, I wanted to play with the puppy outside. I told my mum that we were going outside to play.
Hello Alysha.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you ended up liking the puppy.My mum had a dog that only had 3 legs.He was hit by a car and one leg needed to be amputated.
People were mean to him and started calling him names so I felt sad for your puppy.
I'm glad the story had a happy ending.
What colour was the puppy and did you give it a name?.
Nice structure Alysha. You have described the main ideas of the recount very well. Ka Pai. I have fixed up all the extra spaces in your writing. It is just the formatting when you copy, shift and paste.
ReplyDeleteHi Alysha
ReplyDeleteYou did good. good job i like you wow words you did some good felling to that added in to the story.