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Friday, May 28, 2021

Language features

We have been learning how to Writing some siniles poems and we have also been  learning to Writing. about things and sounds here is my one. 




Person: My friend-Annalise

Six simile 

          

  •  She is funny like clown

  • She is  beautiful as a flower

  •  She is busy as a worker

  • She is happy and friendly

  • She is smart as a teacher 

  • She is amazing  

 

By Alysha





Six explanations


  • makes me laugh

  •  and brightens up  my day

  •  and she helps me if I don't understand work.

  •  as a rainbow

  • and  teachers me some cool stuff

  • she is like my sister  but she is my bff




















3 comments:

  1. We should be thanking you Alysha for reading us your post.
    It made it different to me reading your learning.
    I like that you used a clear voice.`

    I hope that Annalise gets to read this post.Have you shown it to her?.

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  2. We should be thanking you Alysha for reading us your post.
    It made it different to me reading your learning.
    I like that you used a clear voice.`

    I hope that Annalise gets to read this post.Have you shown it to her?.

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  3. Talofa Alysha

    I love the poem that you rote for Annalise.

    I like you book because at the last page you told me what the book was about.

    Next time you can try to say onomatopoeia correctly.And have you show Annalise yet?

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